Apr 01

Why is it that so many of us prefer to use four or five words when often a couple or even one will do? Are we communicating to impress or do we want to convey a clear and digestible message to our audience? Even during every day work place communication, in emails or during informal meetings it is commonplace to hear an indigestible mixture of cliché, business speak, foreignisms and long-winded expressions. Overuse of this kind of language can give the impression that you are pompous and self-important.

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If you keep your language clean and simple, nobody is going to think that you are inarticulate. They are more likely to welcome your plain and natural approach to communication.

Below are just a few examples of expressions that can and should be replaced with much simpler equivalents.

At the current time – this may sound more important than ‘now’ but really now is all you are trying to say

Large in size – an office is large, a handbag is small. It is not necessary to explain that large and small are defining size. We know this.

Null and void – we can say that the contract is null or the contract is void but we don’t need to say both as they mean more or less the same thing.

Advance warning- can a warning ever be anything but advance?

The above mentioned – if you are referencing something you have already mentioned just use ‘this’. ‘This document’ is preferable to ‘the above mentioned document’.

Head up – is there any difference between heading a department and heading up a department? If you agree that there isn’t then one word is better than two.

Sui generis – try not to use Latin or other foreign language expressions as you may risk making your reader feel ignorant if they do not understand. If you want to say something is one of a kind then say so.

At the end of the day – we don’t really mean ‘at the end of the day’ but ‘in the end’ or’ eventually’. This expression is so ubiquitous that it has become clichéd.

Nobody is suggesting that we should always communicate in words of one syllable or that we should always aim for the lowest common denominator. However, many organisations have realised the benefits of a plain English approach to communication. After all time is money and time lost on misunderstandings, misinterpretations or following the wrong instructions costs organisations millions each year.

As a result, many organisations have developed their own internal communication and style guidelines or provide employees with regular communication skills training workshops to help them consider and adjust the language they use, whether in written or spoken communication. Programmes such as Effective Business Writing or Communicating with Impact enable employees to communicate more effectively in plain and simple language.

© Communicaid Group Ltd. 2011

Jan 24

Think about what draws you to a book, news article or webpage. Very often it’s the title or headline that grabs our attention and entices us to read more. Similarly, with business emails if you use a subject line that indicates why you are writing and that engages your reader your email is far more likely to be read sooner and, if required, acted upon. A meaningful subject line helps your reader to identify your topic, prioritise your email and find it quickly again at a later stage. A subject line that engages your reader will make it stand out; the reader will be more likely to read your email sooner and remember what it was about.

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Following the tips below should help you use your subject line to maximum effect:

  • Never leave the subject line blank
  • Make your subject line specific using company or product names if appropriate
  • Give particular consideration to the first word in your subject line as this will determine how easy your email is to search for at a later stage
  • Help your reader to prioritise your email: only use the word urgent if it really is but “Action required” or “FYI only” can be helpful indicators in the subject line
  • If you write regular emails about a similar subject to the same regular contacts try to use a consistent format in your subject line
  • If you change the topic of your email but continue with an existing thread then change the subject line accordingly
  • Make it concise – it’s ok in your subject line to miss out articles, prepositions, etc.
  • Avoid using all capitals as your subject line – it’s important to grab attention but not to shout at your reader!

It is often the little things that can make all the difference when we communicate and the three or four words we choose for our subject line can help our reader to navigate their inbox. You can find a myriad of online resources and reference books to help you appreciate the intricacies of email correspondence or you can attend an email writing course and learn practical tips to improve your email etiquette.

© Communicaid Group Ltd. 2011

Nov 17

A crucial element of professional email etiquette and an essential means of showing courtesy to your reader is keeping your messages concise and to the point. We all receive emails that ramble on, giving us more information than we need but often leaving us unsure of the actual message we need to digest and what the sender wants us to do. Writing concisely will not only save your reader time but will also save you time as you will be less likely to need to chase, clarify or follow up on your original email. Concise emails are read more quickly, actioned appropriately and appreciated by the recipient. Be warned – you risk irritating your reader by sending unnecessarily long and complicated emails.

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Below are some simple tips to help you to keep your emails short and to the point.

Do…

  • Use the active rather than passive voice. The CEO will attend the presentation is better than The meeting will be attended by the CEO.
  • Remember that imperatives are ok. Please return this form by Friday close of business is better than I would appreciate if you could return this form to me by….
  • Use concrete examples rather than complicated explanations
  • Use shorter words where possible, e.g. use rather than utilisation, me rather than myself
  • Use one word rather than groups of words, now instead of at this point in time, quickly instead of with the minimum of delay, daily not on a daily basis and so on

Don’t….

  • Use too many long sentences – if you run out of breath when reading a sentence out loud it is probably too long!
  • Repeat your ideas
  • Give unnecessary back story – keep to the point
  • Use redundant words, e.g. advance warning, large in size

Being aware of the need for concise writing and editing your emails to remove redundancy are important steps towards more professional email writing.  Many organisations run business writing skills courses to enable employees to improve their business email etiquette, saving time for the organisation and individual employees alike through more effective and efficient email communication. 

© Communicaid Group Ltd. 2010

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